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		<title>By: Top 25, BABY! &#171; Luv YA</title>
		<link>http://www.karintabke.com/blog/2009/02/round-ten-3/comment-page-1/#comment-691793</link>
		<dc:creator>Top 25, BABY! &#171; Luv YA</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Feb 2009 01:39:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] 22, 2009 Filed under: Writing, YA &#8212; briaq @ 8:39 pm  Tags: contests, Karin Tabke  Tomorrow Karin Tabke announces the next round of her first line contest (the one I keep calling the Line By Line contest) [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] 22, 2009 Filed under: Writing, YA &#8212; briaq @ 8:39 pm  Tags: contests, Karin Tabke  Tomorrow Karin Tabke announces the next round of her first line contest (the one I keep calling the Line By Line contest) [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Ginny Glass</title>
		<link>http://www.karintabke.com/blog/2009/02/round-ten-3/comment-page-1/#comment-690875</link>
		<dc:creator>Ginny Glass</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Feb 2009 02:26:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>They had been in the interrogation room for twelve hours straight. He hadnâ€™t left, not even to get coffee or a donut or to tag team in his partner for that whole good cop-bad-cop game. Miaâ€™s eyes were dangerously heavy and though she had propped her chin in alternate hands for the last few hours, both of her biceps were beginning to feel like three day old spaghetti. Across the table, the detective stared that same level stare, the green of his eyes striking her like a backhanded slap.
â€œIâ€™ve already told you,â€ she said, exhaustion slurring the edges of her speech,â€ my name isnâ€™t Bridget, itâ€™s Mia.â€
A daysâ€™ growth of beard shadowed his jaw, the only sign that he was any worse for wear from their time in this cinder block hell hole.
â€œEach one of these stacks is a list of charges from a different state,â€ he explained softly, almost sympathetically, steepling his hands over the piles of paper that ran the length of the table, â€œand each stack carries at least a thirty year stretch.â€
Miaâ€™s eyes widened, racing across the dull formica as she counted the stacks, stopping at the mugshot they had shown her during the first hour - of a woman who looked exactly like her.
â€œI know these past few years that weâ€™ve had our ups and downs,â€ he said, leaning in and lifting a hand as ifâ€¦as if he were going to reach for her, â€œbut youâ€™re in serious trouble, and I need you to work with meâ€¦let me help you.â€ 
This was madness - when she&#039;d left the house this morning, on her way to a nothing job in a nothing town in Nowhere, Southern California, she&#039;d never imagined she would end up in a Los Angeles police station by nightfall, being grilled by a man that was either crazy or wrong or both -  and seriously unwilling to admit it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>They had been in the interrogation room for twelve hours straight. He hadnâ€™t left, not even to get coffee or a donut or to tag team in his partner for that whole good cop-bad-cop game. Miaâ€™s eyes were dangerously heavy and though she had propped her chin in alternate hands for the last few hours, both of her biceps were beginning to feel like three day old spaghetti. Across the table, the detective stared that same level stare, the green of his eyes striking her like a backhanded slap.<br />
â€œIâ€™ve already told you,â€ she said, exhaustion slurring the edges of her speech,â€ my name isnâ€™t Bridget, itâ€™s Mia.â€<br />
A daysâ€™ growth of beard shadowed his jaw, the only sign that he was any worse for wear from their time in this cinder block hell hole.<br />
â€œEach one of these stacks is a list of charges from a different state,â€ he explained softly, almost sympathetically, steepling his hands over the piles of paper that ran the length of the table, â€œand each stack carries at least a thirty year stretch.â€<br />
Miaâ€™s eyes widened, racing across the dull formica as she counted the stacks, stopping at the mugshot they had shown her during the first hour &#8211; of a woman who looked exactly like her.<br />
â€œI know these past few years that weâ€™ve had our ups and downs,â€ he said, leaning in and lifting a hand as ifâ€¦as if he were going to reach for her, â€œbut youâ€™re in serious trouble, and I need you to work with meâ€¦let me help you.â€<br />
This was madness &#8211; when she&#8217;d left the house this morning, on her way to a nothing job in a nothing town in Nowhere, Southern California, she&#8217;d never imagined she would end up in a Los Angeles police station by nightfall, being grilled by a man that was either crazy or wrong or both &#8211;  and seriously unwilling to admit it.</p>
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		<title>By: bria</title>
		<link>http://www.karintabke.com/blog/2009/02/round-ten-3/comment-page-1/#comment-690826</link>
		<dc:creator>bria</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Feb 2009 23:42:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Seven lockers down, my boyfriend was making out with Cheryl, the way-too-perky head cheerleader.

I tried not to stare, but when his hand slid past her waist and over her hip, I slammed my locker shut and stormed off in the opposite direction. Not that anyone noticed. The problem â€“ not only was I that gorgeous jockâ€™s secret girlfriend, I also had a secret power.

Iâ€™m invisible.

OK, not &lt;i&gt;invisible&lt;/i&gt; invisible. But, in the not-so-mythical land of Highschoolia where blending in equals obscurity, I rated a negative seven JD on the Jane Doe to Lindsay Lohan visibility scale. Iâ€™d be the first to tell you I didnâ€™t mind â€“ well, typically. Iâ€™d made a deal with the devil â€¦ I mean the boyâ€¦ and stomping away was the only thing I could do.

â€œThe Planâ€ just might kill me where Advanced Trig had failed.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Seven lockers down, my boyfriend was making out with Cheryl, the way-too-perky head cheerleader.</p>
<p>I tried not to stare, but when his hand slid past her waist and over her hip, I slammed my locker shut and stormed off in the opposite direction. Not that anyone noticed. The problem â€“ not only was I that gorgeous jockâ€™s secret girlfriend, I also had a secret power.</p>
<p>Iâ€™m invisible.</p>
<p>OK, not <i>invisible</i> invisible. But, in the not-so-mythical land of Highschoolia where blending in equals obscurity, I rated a negative seven JD on the Jane Doe to Lindsay Lohan visibility scale. Iâ€™d be the first to tell you I didnâ€™t mind â€“ well, typically. Iâ€™d made a deal with the devil â€¦ I mean the boyâ€¦ and stomping away was the only thing I could do.</p>
<p>â€œThe Planâ€ just might kill me where Advanced Trig had failed.</p>
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		<title>By: Sophee Storm</title>
		<link>http://www.karintabke.com/blog/2009/02/round-ten-3/comment-page-1/#comment-690489</link>
		<dc:creator>Sophee Storm</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Feb 2009 02:13:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I was not trying to start a new paragraph with my new sentence! Something happened when I posted:( I hope that won&#039;t make a difference in the judging.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I was not trying to start a new paragraph with my new sentence! Something happened when I posted:( I hope that won&#8217;t make a difference in the judging.</p>
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		<title>By: Sophee Storm</title>
		<link>http://www.karintabke.com/blog/2009/02/round-ten-3/comment-page-1/#comment-690488</link>
		<dc:creator>Sophee Storm</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Feb 2009 02:08:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It may sound odd, but sometimes moments in life seem to have a distinct smell. At any moment, of any day, a plethora of aromas can summon a wealth of emotions and memories. To Grace Riley, lifeâ€™s happy moments were tinged with the perfume of sunshine and fragrant grass. During the moments of sorrow, sadness polluted the air with an oily, suffocating smoke, and even danger caused a detectable metallic scent. The odor that wafted up to her sensitive nose now was none of these.

The smell assaulting her, the repugnant odor of dust and stagnancy, was the same scent that had haunted her steps these last four years. This unshakable companion was loneliness. An emotion that was her companion by choice, but that fact did not make bearing its company any easier.
 
Pushing aside the feeling, Grace tied her apron with the same grim determination that medieval knights donned their armor with before a battle.
Working in a restaurant was a struggle for her, and tonight something more than the smell of dust, fried food, and cheap perfume hung in the air.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It may sound odd, but sometimes moments in life seem to have a distinct smell. At any moment, of any day, a plethora of aromas can summon a wealth of emotions and memories. To Grace Riley, lifeâ€™s happy moments were tinged with the perfume of sunshine and fragrant grass. During the moments of sorrow, sadness polluted the air with an oily, suffocating smoke, and even danger caused a detectable metallic scent. The odor that wafted up to her sensitive nose now was none of these.</p>
<p>The smell assaulting her, the repugnant odor of dust and stagnancy, was the same scent that had haunted her steps these last four years. This unshakable companion was loneliness. An emotion that was her companion by choice, but that fact did not make bearing its company any easier.</p>
<p>Pushing aside the feeling, Grace tied her apron with the same grim determination that medieval knights donned their armor with before a battle.<br />
Working in a restaurant was a struggle for her, and tonight something more than the smell of dust, fried food, and cheap perfume hung in the air.</p>
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		<title>By: Randy</title>
		<link>http://www.karintabke.com/blog/2009/02/round-ten-3/comment-page-1/#comment-690411</link>
		<dc:creator>Randy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Feb 2009 19:35:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Looking back, my mid-life crisis began on a Tuesday in March, right there on aisle twelve of the local supermarket between the laxatives and the condoms. Thatâ€™s the day I confronted an assortment of tampon boxes and wondered if my diminishing egg production warranted the forty-eight count economy size. See, I worried about a future when the half-empty box, now faded and kinda tattered around the edges, still sat beneath the sink ready to mock me every time I reached for a hair dryer or fresh roll of TP.

â€œCan I help you find something, maâ€™am?â€

â€œYeah, could you put out an APB on my youth?â€ A rhetorical question, but when the kid gasped and made a move as though to summon the men in white suits, I dredged up a reassuring smile. â€œJust kidding,â€ I lied, vaguely trying to pinpoint the moment in life when Iâ€™d gone from miss to maâ€™am. But with forty-two guests due to arrive in under five hours, I could hardly afford to wallow in self-pity, so I grabbed a box at random, tossed it in my basket, and slunk to the check-out line.

Just ahead, a woman roughly my age pointed at the cover of a glossy tabloid devoted to the latest batch of celebri-spawn and their stick-thin moms. â€œLook at them,â€ she sneered, â€œall proud of getting their figures back when everybody knows they spend a fortune on personal trainers and high-priced chefs.â€</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Looking back, my mid-life crisis began on a Tuesday in March, right there on aisle twelve of the local supermarket between the laxatives and the condoms. Thatâ€™s the day I confronted an assortment of tampon boxes and wondered if my diminishing egg production warranted the forty-eight count economy size. See, I worried about a future when the half-empty box, now faded and kinda tattered around the edges, still sat beneath the sink ready to mock me every time I reached for a hair dryer or fresh roll of TP.</p>
<p>â€œCan I help you find something, maâ€™am?â€</p>
<p>â€œYeah, could you put out an APB on my youth?â€ A rhetorical question, but when the kid gasped and made a move as though to summon the men in white suits, I dredged up a reassuring smile. â€œJust kidding,â€ I lied, vaguely trying to pinpoint the moment in life when Iâ€™d gone from miss to maâ€™am. But with forty-two guests due to arrive in under five hours, I could hardly afford to wallow in self-pity, so I grabbed a box at random, tossed it in my basket, and slunk to the check-out line.</p>
<p>Just ahead, a woman roughly my age pointed at the cover of a glossy tabloid devoted to the latest batch of celebri-spawn and their stick-thin moms. â€œLook at them,â€ she sneered, â€œall proud of getting their figures back when everybody knows they spend a fortune on personal trainers and high-priced chefs.â€</p>
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		<title>By: Colleen MacLeod</title>
		<link>http://www.karintabke.com/blog/2009/02/round-ten-3/comment-page-1/#comment-690406</link>
		<dc:creator>Colleen MacLeod</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Feb 2009 18:58:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The young prince was going to die. When the angry mob of outlaws and outcasts finally realized who it was that had fallen into their clutches, they would tear the young nobleman to shreds, and there was nothing Shallah could do to prevent it. Blood caked his face and hands, obscuring his features, mute testament to the fact that he had not been captured without a fight. One wrist was manacled to the wall at the far end of the cavern; in the chains that were reserved for criminals among criminals, those who had somehow betrayed the tightly woven structure of this band of misfits.

Drawing her dark cloak tighter around her, Shallah edged quietly through the throng gathering around him, never taking her gaze from his battered face. Even partly obscured by his matted, bloody hair, she could see his dark eyes were keenly intelligent, dangerously angryâ€¦and hauntingly familiar. A snarl curled lips that had they not been cracked and split, would have been full and sensuous.

As she watched him glare defiantly at the mob closing in on him, an echo of a dimly remembered dream tugged at the corners of Shallahâ€™s mind, forgotten images and vague memories she could find no root for.

What treachery had brought him here?

For she knew in her soul he was the last son of the royal family, the last link to the old blood that had quietly stood its ground between good and evil for centuries.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The young prince was going to die. When the angry mob of outlaws and outcasts finally realized who it was that had fallen into their clutches, they would tear the young nobleman to shreds, and there was nothing Shallah could do to prevent it. Blood caked his face and hands, obscuring his features, mute testament to the fact that he had not been captured without a fight. One wrist was manacled to the wall at the far end of the cavern; in the chains that were reserved for criminals among criminals, those who had somehow betrayed the tightly woven structure of this band of misfits.</p>
<p>Drawing her dark cloak tighter around her, Shallah edged quietly through the throng gathering around him, never taking her gaze from his battered face. Even partly obscured by his matted, bloody hair, she could see his dark eyes were keenly intelligent, dangerously angryâ€¦and hauntingly familiar. A snarl curled lips that had they not been cracked and split, would have been full and sensuous.</p>
<p>As she watched him glare defiantly at the mob closing in on him, an echo of a dimly remembered dream tugged at the corners of Shallahâ€™s mind, forgotten images and vague memories she could find no root for.</p>
<p>What treachery had brought him here?</p>
<p>For she knew in her soul he was the last son of the royal family, the last link to the old blood that had quietly stood its ground between good and evil for centuries.</p>
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		<title>By: Cindy Nord</title>
		<link>http://www.karintabke.com/blog/2009/02/round-ten-3/comment-page-1/#comment-690392</link>
		<dc:creator>Cindy Nord</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Feb 2009 16:19:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The warmth of the desert vanished under a shroud of bone-chilling twilight. And Jackson Neale, cautious now after four bloody years of war, slipped deeper into its murky, concealing cloak. Anyone heâ€™d befriended on the trek westward from Virginia could be counted on one hand, and he knew with absolute certainty that the person riding into his camp tonight wasnâ€™t one of them.
Only a fool would enter anotherâ€™s camp without hailing first, and this brazen bastard displayed a boldness that truly amazed him. 

Jackson lowered his hand to his hip, calm assurance enveloping him as his fingers slipped around the worn, wooden grip of a well-oiled Army Colt. Patiently, he waited as the rider guided a handsome Bay straight toward the saddlebags near the fire; the glow from the low flames highlighting expensive leather chaps and a set of Mexican spurs strapped snuggly around dusty, silver-tipped boots. And despite the chill of the encroaching night, his evening callerâ€™s black jacket hung open, revealing a holstered revolver buckled low around a denim-covered hip.

With a smooth dismount, the rider dropped to the ground beside the saddlebags. All caution inside Jackson evaporated the moment the stranger lowered to one knee.  Seeing his chance, he bolted from the shadows and rammed his shoulder full-force into the unsuspecting thief.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The warmth of the desert vanished under a shroud of bone-chilling twilight. And Jackson Neale, cautious now after four bloody years of war, slipped deeper into its murky, concealing cloak. Anyone heâ€™d befriended on the trek westward from Virginia could be counted on one hand, and he knew with absolute certainty that the person riding into his camp tonight wasnâ€™t one of them.<br />
Only a fool would enter anotherâ€™s camp without hailing first, and this brazen bastard displayed a boldness that truly amazed him. </p>
<p>Jackson lowered his hand to his hip, calm assurance enveloping him as his fingers slipped around the worn, wooden grip of a well-oiled Army Colt. Patiently, he waited as the rider guided a handsome Bay straight toward the saddlebags near the fire; the glow from the low flames highlighting expensive leather chaps and a set of Mexican spurs strapped snuggly around dusty, silver-tipped boots. And despite the chill of the encroaching night, his evening callerâ€™s black jacket hung open, revealing a holstered revolver buckled low around a denim-covered hip.</p>
<p>With a smooth dismount, the rider dropped to the ground beside the saddlebags. All caution inside Jackson evaporated the moment the stranger lowered to one knee.  Seeing his chance, he bolted from the shadows and rammed his shoulder full-force into the unsuspecting thief.</p>
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		<title>By: Cindy Carroll</title>
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		<dc:creator>Cindy Carroll</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Feb 2009 00:36:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>If sheâ€™d been a bad girl when she had the chance, she probably wouldnâ€™t be dying right now. It wasnâ€™t supposed to happen like this. When she sucked in a breath, the metallic scent in the air made her gag. The queasy feeling in the pit of her stomach told her it wasnâ€™t just her blood. She would never forgive herself ifâ€¦

â€œSunshine?â€ The darkness swallowed her whisper.

â€œIâ€™m here, but you need to be quiet.â€

Relief started to flood through her, but slowed to a trickle, as the cold from the cement floor seeped into her bones.  She struggled to move but her arms, tied behind her back, refused to budge.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If sheâ€™d been a bad girl when she had the chance, she probably wouldnâ€™t be dying right now. It wasnâ€™t supposed to happen like this. When she sucked in a breath, the metallic scent in the air made her gag. The queasy feeling in the pit of her stomach told her it wasnâ€™t just her blood. She would never forgive herself ifâ€¦</p>
<p>â€œSunshine?â€ The darkness swallowed her whisper.</p>
<p>â€œIâ€™m here, but you need to be quiet.â€</p>
<p>Relief started to flood through her, but slowed to a trickle, as the cold from the cement floor seeped into her bones.  She struggled to move but her arms, tied behind her back, refused to budge.</p>
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		<title>By: Candi</title>
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		<dc:creator>Candi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Feb 2009 00:07:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>She was going to die.

What cruel twist of irony would take her life at the hands of the very people sheâ€™d tried to save? It wasnâ€™t fair, certainly unjust, but as she dropped her head to her knees, she knew it was the truth.

The hard jungle ground beneath her rumbled with the pounding of the natives dance. Darkness enclosed the clearing where the tribe congregated and the startled cries of jungle creatures filtered through the trees from all directions. 

She should be scared, terrified really, but somehow - she wasnâ€™t.

Actually, the more she thought about it, the situation she found herself in seemed somewhat poetic - or maybe the crash had just rattled her brain more than sheâ€™d originally thought.

She could see it now - her eulogy would read; Myla Jordan, twenty-six year old InterCorp engineer was killed in a helicopter crash somewhere in the Peruvian jungleâ€¦

Fate had dealt an unfair hand this time around and now sheâ€™d be remembered as one of the bad guys, nothing more than another of the oil companyâ€™s ethically deficient employees. Worse yet, was the loss of her journal and the pages of damning evidence she&#039;d collected that could have brought InterCorp Oil&#039;s operations to a standstill.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>She was going to die.</p>
<p>What cruel twist of irony would take her life at the hands of the very people sheâ€™d tried to save? It wasnâ€™t fair, certainly unjust, but as she dropped her head to her knees, she knew it was the truth.</p>
<p>The hard jungle ground beneath her rumbled with the pounding of the natives dance. Darkness enclosed the clearing where the tribe congregated and the startled cries of jungle creatures filtered through the trees from all directions. </p>
<p>She should be scared, terrified really, but somehow &#8211; she wasnâ€™t.</p>
<p>Actually, the more she thought about it, the situation she found herself in seemed somewhat poetic &#8211; or maybe the crash had just rattled her brain more than sheâ€™d originally thought.</p>
<p>She could see it now &#8211; her eulogy would read; Myla Jordan, twenty-six year old InterCorp engineer was killed in a helicopter crash somewhere in the Peruvian jungleâ€¦</p>
<p>Fate had dealt an unfair hand this time around and now sheâ€™d be remembered as one of the bad guys, nothing more than another of the oil companyâ€™s ethically deficient employees. Worse yet, was the loss of her journal and the pages of damning evidence she&#8217;d collected that could have brought InterCorp Oil&#8217;s operations to a standstill.</p>
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